Unfortunately, my anxieties came to bear regarding last week’s elections in the United States. Me needing to take some time to sort my feelings, plus a very busy weekend meant that I got further behind than I wanted regarding time to write these round ups. I’d considered stressing myself out over getting one up today, but decided to allow myself to take it easy today before work.
However, I didn’t want to leave you guys without anything. So a friend of mine gave me permission to post her Home dialogue edits here on TWWR. These changes really highlight that in addition to the art, the dialogue is another weak spot in this comic. Here the dialogue flows better and aligns more closer to the characters’ personalities. These are just snippets of edits I shared. Make sure to read Dreaming-Paradise’s full Tumblr posts for the complete edits, plus transcripts of said dialogue if you’re having a difficult time with the size of the text.
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Dreaming-Paradise’s full Tumblr Post.
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Dreaming-Paradise’s full Tumblr post.
I’ll be back next week with the full round up. Take care until then. And another huge thanks to Dreaming-Paradise!
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