yeah, the bad writing really gives this scenario no saving grace.

I’ve have my thoughts up on Monday or Tuesday regarding the new page. That said the first things things that come to mind are:

1. THAT’s NOT WHAT YOU TOLD ROGIO. You told that sex pest to RUN, not to face his problems. What the fuck, Fjordor?!

2. THEN WHY DID YOU TURN KARGO IN IF YOU’RE JUST GOING TO GO AGAINST THE CAPITAL???

Fair enough regarding Kargo.

I think the reason I’m kind of not holding the murder of two merchants against him is because it was so out of character for him. Yes, it seems like he had signs of PTSD, but Kargo usually turned his wrath on MT dogs. (Maybe knives are his trigger?) Then Fjordor just reports him, maybe knowing at not caring that he’s been acting odd since Roamer left. It’s just so weird and badly written. Then it’s worse that Kique wanted it both ways. By that I mean, Fjordor reporting Kargo, THEN allowing him to escape to the north, pursued by bounty hunters that only selectively do their jobs. If Fjordor was serious about justice for the merchants, he would have not given Kargo the chance to escape and came back with said bounty hunters or warriors from Solar Stag in tow. A deeply unserious reaction to murder, then regret. In a better written story Kargo’s killing two dogs would have consequences that actually mean something. God, thinking about Home gives me stress headaches. X_X

But yeah, I completely understand where you’re coming from even if I don’t completely agree.

fdoors view in the newest page is now made worse cuz hes telling kargo to go against the capital. the one fdoor extremely respected. and pushes kargo to stay and put everyone at risk of the capital punishing murderer harborers. becuase “RoGiO dId ThE sAmE!” when they have two incredibly separate reasons and the issues behind them.

also gonna copy paste my comment from grasscakes post. ignore repeats in points. :v//

“i’m sowwy for reporting you for killing two innocent people. UwU”
fuck off, it wasn’t something like petty theft he committed. and why worry about bounty hunters anyway. they did fuck all with the Reddead tribe. the only one to hunt him was sorta the scroll collector girl, forgot her name, and it wasn’t even her job. HECK shes been told not to interfere with shit, so she couldn’t report about him anyway!