I love your version of this alternate story! It’s a lot better and actually has a theme that makes sense. When the fans create better stories than the author himself.

What bothers me is that if Kique had actually bothered to write out his script, the Rabisu could’ve fit right in!

Picture this: the Rabisu are attacking other dogs (instead of ghouls since that plot just got dropped) so when the Shield Wolves and Ulvsbane arrived on the planet, they were immediately banished or the gods separated them from the other dogs for their safety since the dogs already had a prejudice about any creature who looked different due to their history with the Rabisu.

The main characters then could make it their mission to help rebuild relationships between the long-fanged creatures and the other Tribes by going to gather everyone together to take the Rabisu down.

Jahla could still make Havenreach but she would A. Have the idea on her own and B. use it as a safe-haven for any creatures who were discriminated against and it could be were the planning for the war against the Rabisu would take place.

Ronja could journey to MT due to hearing how strong they are but find out how horribly females are treated as second-class citizens. (No SA though, just females being unable to hold positions of power.) She could escapes with the females to Havenreach with the help of Kargo and Roamer (though Ronja would lead the mission) while the remaining MT males (apart from Rogio) would side with the Rabisu (with insider info) when the fanged dogs promised to help them get the females back. South spear would also team up with the Rabisu.

Rogio could pretend to side with the females and manipulate Roamer/everyone before killing Kargo (the strongest warrior) and severely injuring Ferah into a coma (the main strategist) in an act of betrayal and revealing his true colors. Then the war would start with the Rabisu summon gong demons/dark gods to destroy the others. Fighting would happen, dogs would die, etc;. Main theme would be about overcoming prejudice as the crew also learns that but all the Rabisu are bad as an insider (taking the place of Romé) would give them info after seeing what the Asmundr group have been doing to help mend relations.

(Also the Capital and Marmaduke wouldn’t exist in this version due to them not really having a point.)

If at least *something* was the main theme, then the story would be a lot more coherent!

I guess Kique added the clicking because he thought it would be cool? It’s just weird. Like Feaf talking while holding a knife. It’s a shame Marmaduke (LOL) probably has plot armor for now.

Considering yesterday’s update of GS, I think you might be on to something… It would be wild to see deer (cultists maybe) wanting to see extinction, but the possibility is pretty realistic.

Where does the click even comes from? I honestly don’t get It. Also‚ how can Feaf talk with a knife on her mouth? The rabisu are really ugly tbh‚ I hope they kill Marmaduke tho fuck that guy

Now with Goldenshrike‚ I think Helevise have been killed by a deer with a crow halv. Someone wanted to prevent her from talking to Antaras about stopping what he is doing. Maybe some deer want extintion!? We see Helevise seeing a crow in the air and she believes it was her daughter’s but it was most likely a trap. There’s also Dousa who is seen peeping into Iralee’s conversation and we later see a bird also spying Iralee and Helevise. So my guess is Dousa and someone else‚ I wonder if the heels are ok since we saw a dark figure approaching them.