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		By: waffles4life		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Nov 2023 21:17:23 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.twwronline.com/2023/11/13/twwr-round-up-11-13-2023-some-lightheartedness-in-the-darkness/#comment-169&quot;&gt;BreadBuster&lt;/a&gt;.

XD the funny thing is, I saw someone one time ask him about the Formgryms or whatever if they were based on sabertooth cats. apparently there not accoriding to kique. So now I&#039;m just sitting here thinking if this dude is really gonna pull another 180 and think that his &quot;Forngryms&quot; are original, because they are 100% not. Literally they are sabertooth cats (tigers) with the dumbest coats names gives. They are not original and he can&#039;t copyright them, pretty sure if you showed that to a child they&#039;d think its a sabetooth cat lmao. 

it&#039;s like that one other time were he tried to claim that his &quot;marghouls&quot; or whatever demon thing was made. but he tried t claim them as 100% his original idea i believe lol, but they aren&#039;t. things and other creatures have been around way longer then his shitty comic. If he really wanted something unquie going then should just waited to make out home and flesh out story and idea&#039;s, let the dogs have been evolved or something on aedra as its not earth. there could of been a much better possibility put into their world that would makes sense and work for them. Because this whole thing with the dogs building literally frikin walls, huts etc etc. It&#039;s not possible, a dogs paw does not bend certain ways and if i did while breaking there anatomy there bones would just break cause they aren&#039;t meant for that type of stuff, like that one page where we see those huts perched up high in the now gone bayou tribe. you&#039;re telling me a dog bulit that? without thumbs or a damn ladder? unless these mf have magic powers were they can float or something its not possible at all lol. Also magnets my ass because the strength of magets will get weaker over time or not every magnet can hold such things together.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.twwronline.com/2023/11/13/twwr-round-up-11-13-2023-some-lightheartedness-in-the-darkness/#comment-169">BreadBuster</a>.</p>
<p>XD the funny thing is, I saw someone one time ask him about the Formgryms or whatever if they were based on sabertooth cats. apparently there not accoriding to kique. So now I&#8217;m just sitting here thinking if this dude is really gonna pull another 180 and think that his &#8220;Forngryms&#8221; are original, because they are 100% not. Literally they are sabertooth cats (tigers) with the dumbest coats names gives. They are not original and he can&#8217;t copyright them, pretty sure if you showed that to a child they&#8217;d think its a sabetooth cat lmao. </p>
<p>it&#8217;s like that one other time were he tried to claim that his &#8220;marghouls&#8221; or whatever demon thing was made. but he tried t claim them as 100% his original idea i believe lol, but they aren&#8217;t. things and other creatures have been around way longer then his shitty comic. If he really wanted something unquie going then should just waited to make out home and flesh out story and idea&#8217;s, let the dogs have been evolved or something on aedra as its not earth. there could of been a much better possibility put into their world that would makes sense and work for them. Because this whole thing with the dogs building literally frikin walls, huts etc etc. It&#8217;s not possible, a dogs paw does not bend certain ways and if i did while breaking there anatomy there bones would just break cause they aren&#8217;t meant for that type of stuff, like that one page where we see those huts perched up high in the now gone bayou tribe. you&#8217;re telling me a dog bulit that? without thumbs or a damn ladder? unless these mf have magic powers were they can float or something its not possible at all lol. Also magnets my ass because the strength of magets will get weaker over time or not every magnet can hold such things together.</p>
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		By: TWWR Online		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Nov 2023 21:48:09 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.twwronline.com/2023/11/13/twwr-round-up-11-13-2023-some-lightheartedness-in-the-darkness/#comment-170&quot;&gt;BreadBuster&lt;/a&gt;.

Pretty much! X_X]]></description>
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<p>Pretty much! X_X</p>
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		By: TWWR Online		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Nov 2023 21:47:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.twwronline.com/2023/11/13/twwr-round-up-11-13-2023-some-lightheartedness-in-the-darkness/#comment-171&quot;&gt;Gaze&lt;/a&gt;.

Spot on. I think Kique&#039;s biggest problem with writing realistic relationships is that he&#039;s somewhat of a shut-in. He doesn&#039;t go out much and is terminally online. The lack of interaction with people and cutting off anyone who disagrees with him shows in his writing. He doesn&#039;t know how relationships work. Everything is supposed to be fine and there should be no conflict. Or what conflict there is should be resolved quickly, and he thinks his audience doesn&#039;t care for world and character building despite them telling him how much they want it. Now, he could research to get around his lack of worldly experience, but he wont&#039; do that either. 

Golden Shrike is definitely a top tier comic. For my own favorite characters (they are all great), I&#039;m very partial to Runi. ]]></description>
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<p>Spot on. I think Kique&#8217;s biggest problem with writing realistic relationships is that he&#8217;s somewhat of a shut-in. He doesn&#8217;t go out much and is terminally online. The lack of interaction with people and cutting off anyone who disagrees with him shows in his writing. He doesn&#8217;t know how relationships work. Everything is supposed to be fine and there should be no conflict. Or what conflict there is should be resolved quickly, and he thinks his audience doesn&#8217;t care for world and character building despite them telling him how much they want it. Now, he could research to get around his lack of worldly experience, but he wont&#8217; do that either. </p>
<p>Golden Shrike is definitely a top tier comic. For my own favorite characters (they are all great), I&#8217;m very partial to Runi. </p>
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		By: Gaze		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Nov 2023 16:17:44 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Kique really has no idea how to write characters behaving realistically. In other pages, did you see Rhovanion&#039;s reunion with the Asmundr pack? His reunion with Kainan and the others was so underwhelming and rushed. In a single page these characters were reunited. Never mind the fact that he has been separated from his father and his familial pack for YEARS, let&#039;s just skip all the emotions and instead let&#039;s just make the characters talk about being separated from their own kids for years like their children just started college. Remember Zahira? And Raela? And Raimo? And holy shit Johaan?? Yeah, me neither. It occurred to me that Raimo, Raela, Johaan, etc, none of them except Kainan had said A SINGLE THING throughout this whole comic, until those pages. XD 
I&#039;m surprised Johaan wasn&#039;t screaming at them or didn&#039;t fly into a demonic rage that Ronja, his own daughter that he hadn&#039;t seen for months (years irl), had just vanished. That he was speaking to the same dog, Rhovanion, that had withheld Ronja&#039;s disappearance from them. And of course, Rhov had to say, &quot;We&#039;ve all been through various things that changed us&quot;. Nope, no you have NOT changed. NONE of you have changed. Stop TELLING us and SHOW us already. None of these characters even tried to find their family at all. And of course, Kique is still trying to hammer home that Khellir--Oh, sorry, Mar(ma)duk(e) is evil, making Kainan tell us what we already know. 
And Kainan&#039;s BS non-explanation, &quot;Father is trying to tell us the only way he can...&quot;? &#039;The only way&#039; he can? What &quot;way&quot;? By keeping everyone in the dark and making them stumble and guess what he&#039;s trying to tell them? Cuz that&#039;s all Father ever did throughout Asmundr! XD Just as it wasn&#039;t Plot Convenient of him to tell them everything or help Lifa and her sons or the Shield Wolves, it&#039;s not Plot Convenient for him to simply tell them what&#039;s going on yet.

And just like Ronja and Rogio&#039;s underwhelmed reaction to Roamer killing someone and Rhov&#039;s rushed reunion with the Asmundr pack, Kique reminds us that he can&#039;t write realistic reactions to certain situations, here in this very page. Diarko literally just saw his own mother get shot in the shoulder and seemingly DIE in front of him, why is he acting like his mom has come to pick him up from school?? Why is this kid so insta-trusting of these stranger dogs when he was raised among an awful tribe of felines that were oppressed by dogs, hunted, killed, and ate their dog enemies? I agree with everyone here saying he should be wary around them and it should have taken a while for him to trust them. The specisism between the dogs and the cats is so underdeveloped and shoehorned, as is the prejudices between the dogs and the wolves/Akiulfr (never mind that most of the dogs, Southern Jaros especially, look JUST LIKE WOLVES themselves!). 
I&#039;m surprised Kique didn&#039;t just kill her off-screen after Feaf&#039;s scene with her in order to bolster Roami-Stu and Rogi-Hoe&#039;s toxic relationship and make them fathers. Never mind that they&#039;d be horrible parents. The cub deserves to be with his mother and the rest of Shiverfall.

On the subject of Golden Shrike, I binge-read the pages currently out a few months back, and have been enjoying it a lot. I really like the world and the relationships between the characters. I think my favorite character (though I really love the others) has been the protagonist, Nero. XD]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kique really has no idea how to write characters behaving realistically. In other pages, did you see Rhovanion&#8217;s reunion with the Asmundr pack? His reunion with Kainan and the others was so underwhelming and rushed. In a single page these characters were reunited. Never mind the fact that he has been separated from his father and his familial pack for YEARS, let&#8217;s just skip all the emotions and instead let&#8217;s just make the characters talk about being separated from their own kids for years like their children just started college. Remember Zahira? And Raela? And Raimo? And holy shit Johaan?? Yeah, me neither. It occurred to me that Raimo, Raela, Johaan, etc, none of them except Kainan had said A SINGLE THING throughout this whole comic, until those pages. XD<br />
I&#8217;m surprised Johaan wasn&#8217;t screaming at them or didn&#8217;t fly into a demonic rage that Ronja, his own daughter that he hadn&#8217;t seen for months (years irl), had just vanished. That he was speaking to the same dog, Rhovanion, that had withheld Ronja&#8217;s disappearance from them. And of course, Rhov had to say, &#8220;We&#8217;ve all been through various things that changed us&#8221;. Nope, no you have NOT changed. NONE of you have changed. Stop TELLING us and SHOW us already. None of these characters even tried to find their family at all. And of course, Kique is still trying to hammer home that Khellir&#8211;Oh, sorry, Mar(ma)duk(e) is evil, making Kainan tell us what we already know.<br />
And Kainan&#8217;s BS non-explanation, &#8220;Father is trying to tell us the only way he can&#8230;&#8221;? &#8216;The only way&#8217; he can? What &#8220;way&#8221;? By keeping everyone in the dark and making them stumble and guess what he&#8217;s trying to tell them? Cuz that&#8217;s all Father ever did throughout Asmundr! XD Just as it wasn&#8217;t Plot Convenient of him to tell them everything or help Lifa and her sons or the Shield Wolves, it&#8217;s not Plot Convenient for him to simply tell them what&#8217;s going on yet.</p>
<p>And just like Ronja and Rogio&#8217;s underwhelmed reaction to Roamer killing someone and Rhov&#8217;s rushed reunion with the Asmundr pack, Kique reminds us that he can&#8217;t write realistic reactions to certain situations, here in this very page. Diarko literally just saw his own mother get shot in the shoulder and seemingly DIE in front of him, why is he acting like his mom has come to pick him up from school?? Why is this kid so insta-trusting of these stranger dogs when he was raised among an awful tribe of felines that were oppressed by dogs, hunted, killed, and ate their dog enemies? I agree with everyone here saying he should be wary around them and it should have taken a while for him to trust them. The specisism between the dogs and the cats is so underdeveloped and shoehorned, as is the prejudices between the dogs and the wolves/Akiulfr (never mind that most of the dogs, Southern Jaros especially, look JUST LIKE WOLVES themselves!).<br />
I&#8217;m surprised Kique didn&#8217;t just kill her off-screen after Feaf&#8217;s scene with her in order to bolster Roami-Stu and Rogi-Hoe&#8217;s toxic relationship and make them fathers. Never mind that they&#8217;d be horrible parents. The cub deserves to be with his mother and the rest of Shiverfall.</p>
<p>On the subject of Golden Shrike, I binge-read the pages currently out a few months back, and have been enjoying it a lot. I really like the world and the relationships between the characters. I think my favorite character (though I really love the others) has been the protagonist, Nero. XD</p>
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		By: BreadBuster		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Nov 2023 10:42:24 +0000</pubDate>
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He plays russian roulette but with ideas. Tomorrow racism‚ next week genocide]]></description>
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<p>He plays russian roulette but with ideas. Tomorrow racism‚ next week genocide</p>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Nov 2023 07:21:33 +0000</pubDate>
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Yes‚ aparently the sabertooth cats (im not using their horrid names)suffer racism from dogs and they eat them‚ which doesn&#039;t make sense and I guess the author ran out of ideas so yes sudden racism! Yipeee. Now some children can be a little too trusty but Diarko here must be the equivalent of a 10 y.o so... Shouldnt he be wary? and he should be with his mom. Notice how we barely see the mom characters being moms or interacting with their children‚ Ronja&#039;s kids are almost grown and we have seen like four pages of them together. Ugh I wonder why
And ok put Diarko in the toxic tribe that gets attacked each two days because there&#039;s too many females.
Wouldn&#039;t be surprised If next pages his mom is like: I can&#039;t protect you IM BLIND and just dumps her kid with the gay saints with racist eyes around
Talking about kids‚ Kique totally forgot Akleja exists. I also wonder why]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.twwronline.com/2023/11/13/twwr-round-up-11-13-2023-some-lightheartedness-in-the-darkness/#comment-162">waffles4life</a>.</p>
<p>Yes‚ aparently the sabertooth cats (im not using their horrid names)suffer racism from dogs and they eat them‚ which doesn&#8217;t make sense and I guess the author ran out of ideas so yes sudden racism! Yipeee. Now some children can be a little too trusty but Diarko here must be the equivalent of a 10 y.o so&#8230; Shouldnt he be wary? and he should be with his mom. Notice how we barely see the mom characters being moms or interacting with their children‚ Ronja&#8217;s kids are almost grown and we have seen like four pages of them together. Ugh I wonder why<br />
And ok put Diarko in the toxic tribe that gets attacked each two days because there&#8217;s too many females.<br />
Wouldn&#8217;t be surprised If next pages his mom is like: I can&#8217;t protect you IM BLIND and just dumps her kid with the gay saints with racist eyes around<br />
Talking about kids‚ Kique totally forgot Akleja exists. I also wonder why</p>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Nov 2023 07:12:05 +0000</pubDate>
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I honestly don&#039;t get why they need weapons. Its just cool factor like‚ they got claws and fangs, they are hunters. 

It makes total sense that Kique doesn&#039;t know about realistic reactions if he shuts down anyone who doesn&#039;t agree with him and only hangs out with people like Alakai. Diarko should be a traumatized child not a happy little boy hanging out with friends]]></description>
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<p>I honestly don&#8217;t get why they need weapons. Its just cool factor like‚ they got claws and fangs, they are hunters. </p>
<p>It makes total sense that Kique doesn&#8217;t know about realistic reactions if he shuts down anyone who doesn&#8217;t agree with him and only hangs out with people like Alakai. Diarko should be a traumatized child not a happy little boy hanging out with friends</p>
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